Paul's Topic

What is the best part of your day, week, month, and life? The best part of my day would be when Ty told me that there was no soccer practice today. I was happy because who wants to go and run around outside in this weather. The best part of my week would be when my Lacrosse game got canceled yesterday. It was at a bad field in the cold rain with kids who hit really hard.

The best part of my month would be this past weekend when I finished a project that I had been working really hard on. I was a great feeling to look back at all that work and see how good it was. The best part of my life would probably be a couple of weeks ago when I went to Orlando. I was able to get into the park twice for free and go to a private showing of the fireworks. Also, I was able to SCUBA dive in the Finding Nemo tank in Epcot.

Writing Center

This semester, I went to the writing center for my literary analysis. I was almost nervous, but the writing fellow in there at that time was very welcoming and helpful. Ms. Spaht had to leave so me the writing fellow and another student were alone in the writing center. I had a good experience. Also, I believe that this helped my writing a lot.

My paper was shorter than it needed to be, so I had to add somethings afterwards. The writing fellow helped me to fix some freestanding quotations, and showed me that I can use a colon to do that. Also, I received a sheet with lots of transition words, I have been having trouble with those for a while. The fellow would talk with one person while the other was working to find things that could be improved. I was amazed to find how many simple mistakes I made from typing too quickl.y


Wonder
By: R J Palacio
107 pages
2 hours

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Wonder
R J Palacio
213 pages
4 hours