Research Paper

I felt confident about the style of the paper. It felt good to seem to know how to write a paper in this style. I felt good about my number of sources because I ended up using all but one of my ten required sources. I was concerned about how much I explained each source. I felt like there was so much background information that was needed just to make a small claim.

I feel like I need some help working on finding the proper conventions for each separate situation, I have trouble thinking of appropriate ones (not time related). I also fell like I could use some guidance on whether or not I am including too much background information. Another area of my concern would be about my conclusion, towards the end when I am trying to make my point, it almost feels like I make the writing a little more informal than in the rest of the paper.